Monday, August 26, 2013

Fenway Park 1st Writing Assignment


Cole Ballard
English Literature and Composition
Blogger Assignment
Miss Wagner
Fenway Park
Jon and Jeremy are dressed as cops getting ready to go rob Fenway Park. There team consist of 5 men. Jon, Jeremy, Ben, Blake, and Tom. Ben takes care of the communications. While Blake and Tom wait at the getaway vehicle. They plan to go into the money room of Fenway Park and get out with no deaths. FBI agent Don Draper has been tracking this group for about 5 years and still has no evidence of what they have done in the past. They have robbed multiple banks and stores without getting caught. 
Jon and Jeremy get into the tunnels of the stadium. They confront a group of men. Jon says “ We got a distress call, Who called?” Everyone says they haven’t called. Jeremy pulls out his Glock 22 and orders everyone to get on the ground. They get hand ties and tie them there hands together. Jon advances into the money room. He tells the men working in there that he has people outside there house ready to kill there wives if they don’t let them in. The men without hesitation open the door. Jon and Jeremy tie them up against a table in the middle of the room. Jon hands Jeremy a duffle bag and pulls one out himself. They pile 1.4 million dollars into the bag.
 While all of this was going down. Ben had some troubles of his own. He couldn’t find a way to get into the communications room. He finally found a grate and went down. Luckily it led right to the communications room. He cut the cords just before Jon and Jeremy hand tied the group of men. Once they had gotten all 1.4 million dollars into there bags they walked out. They had a suspicious look. Only one cop has seen them, but didn’t recognize what the were up to. While they just got to the getaway van. Jon senses that they are getting trapped. 
Jon and Jeremy take off there cop uniforms to get ready to get into a gun fight. Once this happens the men take fire. Jon and Jeremy start laying down covering firing without hitting anyone. Blake, the one that was supposed to drive away gets his head blown off by a sniper. Jeremy gets pissed and kills 4 men with a grenade. Ben told them Jon and Jeremy to put the cop uniforms back on, and that Tom and him will risk themselves for them to live. So Tom drives the van through the door. The van gets lit up to look like a bon fire. Jon and Jeremy blend in to look like the Boston Police Department. Draper notices one cop astray from all the others. It was Jeremy.
Draper ordered to the cop to stop, but Jeremy just kept walking. He ordered him to stop again. Jeremy turned around and hip fired his sub machine gun at Don. Jon noticed this and followed them. Jeremy ran out of ammo so Draper returned fire with his shotgun. He had hit Jeremy in the leg. Jeremy crossed the street to take one last stand. He was behind a trash can and a mail drop of box. The cops had surrounded the place within 20 seconds. He took on last breathe stud up to fire at will and got shot shot multiple times in the chest and face. Jeremy couldn’t believe what he had just saw. He hurried up and got into the cop car and left forever. He is the only one that survived the robbery from the 5 man team. He had half of the money that they stole and was never seen again.